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16 December 2010 @ 01:26 am
[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch21  

Chapter 21


January, 2008


Pi: *eyes widen in shock* Toma?

Toma: Good morning *smiles*

Pi: *confused* am I dreaming?

Toma: What do you think? *giggles*

Pi: I am dreaming! Ugh *holding his head because of incredible pain* or maybe I’m starting to become delusional?

Toma: *laughs loudly* Go wash your face and come eat breakfast! There is some medicine for your headache too!

Pi: *shocked* Toma?  

Toma: Hmmm?

Pi: *pinching himself* is this real?

Toma: Should I get worried for you to ask this question twice already?

Pi: *confused* How did I get here?

Toma: Jin dropped you

Pi: I’m…Toma I wa—

Toma: its ok we’ll talk later Pi *heads toward the kitchen*

Pi: I really missed you!

Toma: *stopped in his track with a smirk on his face and turned around* I don’t see how you hitting the clubs everyday means you missing me!!

Pi: I was hitting the clubs to get drunk! If that’s not missing you, what is?

Toma: and what am I supposed to say? I miss you too?

Pi: *hurt* no…I’m not forcing you to say anything…you know….all this time we were separated…all I was thinking about is how stupid I was…I took you for granted knowing I will find you anytime I want…you’ll be there for me always…but I was wrong….I’m sorry Toma!

Toma: *heading toward Pi* I know babe….All this time I was actually waiting for you…to figure that out…so that you will remember that we’re in a relationship here….we need to work on it together! *places one of his hand on Pi’s cheek*

Pi: Toma *put his hand on Toma’s hand* I truly missed you….I love you so much babe

Toma: I missed you too….Just so you know, this is so our first and last break from each other….got it?

Pi: *chuckles* yes please!

Toma: *smiles* I love you Pi *leans toward to kiss Pi*

Pi: *meets Toma in a sweetest kiss which Toma breaks*

Toma: Babe, I love you and all…but you stink of alcohol

Pi: *laughs* yeah…sorry about that…I will take a shower, but I will need your help since I still feel dizzy *winks*

Toma: I will gladly help *giggles*




During 1 Pound no Fukuin, 2008


Kame: Do you know what you’re asking me?

Jin: I know Kazu!

Kame: You ruined me…my life and you’re asking for a chance? *irritated* Yamapi knows, Johnny-san knows too….how I can face them again?

Jin: It’s not your fault…you didn’t do anything wrong….You were the victim…

Kame: *looks away* you’re victim!

Jin: I’m sorry….I really mean it even if it doesn’t change anything….I’m very sorry….But I swear, I would have tried to fix this before I left to LA if it weren’t for Johnny-san…

Kame: Don‘t even dare put the blame on him?!

Jin: I’m not, but he’s the one who forced me to leave…if it weren’t for him…maybe I would have a--

Kame:  a what? A chance? How come I believe any of what you’re saying anyway….Maybe you’re the one who decided to leave from your own…

Jin: Yes and I decided to learn English all of a sudden *in a mocking tone*

Kame:  So what are you saying? He threatened you and that’s why you left?

Jin: He actually did! He threatened me with the video he has of—*he stopped talking and looked away from Kame’s gaze*  

Kame: *getting freaked out* what did he say?

Jin: He would….send a copy to my family…your family…*palmed his face* I really screwed up!

Kame was annoyed by the memory of what happened and while looking away from Jin he was worried about that video tape…He truly needs to get it from Johnny-san somehow because he will always be living in fear of someone else finding out about this….Kame was brought back to reality by Jin’s sudden voice…

Jin: I’m sorry…I made you go through a lot!

Kame: *in a mocking tone* yeah…you definitely did that!

Jin: But I really want to fix things between us….I really want to make it up to you Kazu

Kame: Enough from this talk!

Jin: I’m serious Kazu….I want to start over…please?

Kame: *in accusing eyes* do you even know that I can’t even have a normal relationship with anyone because of you!!?

Jin: So, you’ve never been in a relationship? You’re not in a relationship with anyone? *hope evidence in his voice* Not even Koki?

Kame: *irritated* of course not!

Jin: *sighs in relief and smiles* Thank god!

Kame: *getting really mad* what the fuck are you smiling for?

Jin:  *grinning* I’m sorry, but I’m happy that you’re not taken by anyone.

Kame: And do you think that gives you the right to grin? Do you think that you still got a chance? Keep dreaming on bastard! *Kame stood up and was heading toward his bedroom*

Jin: *following him* Kazu!

Kame: Fuck off Jin! Just leave the apartment! I want to be alone! *shutting the bedroom on Jin’s face*

Jin: *Jin put his foot in the door’s way and didn’t allow Kame to close it* can we start over?

Kame: *annoyed* Move your foot!!

Jin: I won’t! Not until you answer me!

Kame: *yelling* I answered you!! Move your foot or I swear I’m going to shut the door on it and let you bleed to death!

Jin: Do it! It will hurt me less believe me!

Kame: Are you crazy?

Jin: *talking very fast and loudly* Yes, I’m crazily in love with you and I don’t care what you do to me Kazu…you can go ahead and kill me for all I care because I’ll be dead without you…

Kame: *taken back from Jin’s outburst* you’re crazy!

Jin: I know!

Kame: Give up Akanishi…I will never give you a chance!

Jin: *hurt* do you hate me that much Kazu?

Kame: *heart felt like ripped apart from Jin’s broken voice and question* you can’t even imagine! “Don’t you fucking kidding me Kazuya Kamenashi! He means nothing to you! He hurt you and you feel sorry for him now???”  *Kame was mad at himself that he blurted out yelling* I just hate you so much! You could have said all this to me back then and I would have run to you happily, but now…..it’s too late…..it’s impossible……I can’t just forget everything like nothing happened…what you did…….it killed me Jin…..it really did and I can never repair from it……I tried so many times, but I couldn’t…….I did love you once…….I did……..but my hate is much more stronger…..it’s hard to replace that hate with love…….

Jin: I don’t care how much it takes Kazu, but I’m going to wait for you till you finally can forgive me……or at least love me, just please……don’t say it’s impossible….give me a chance….please

Kame: Don’t bother! I don’t want to be with you…GOD!!! *grit his teeth*

Jin: *almost in begging tone* Kazu!!

Kame: I mean it Jin! I don’t want you in my life. I’ll try to act normally around you when we’re in work, but other than that, I can’t do anything else….

Jin: *tears falling hurt from what Kame said*

Kame: *taken back from seeing Jin crying..it had been a long time since the last time he saw him crying like this that he let go of the door and moved outside the room* c-could you just leave?

Jin: *looking at Kame then he lowered his face looking at the floor while moving toward the apartment door* I…I…won’t give up…..s-sorry t-to bother you

Kame was holding himself from crying too…A part of him wants to hurt Jin just like he hurt him, but another part want to forget everything that happened and move on…and go there to Jin’s side and hug him right now…It pained him seeing the man he loved crying because of him…


Suddenly, memories of Jin and their wonderful friendship flew right in front of him as a film roll while watching Jin’s back…the rings…their time in Gokusen…Jin smiling face….Jin hints about how beautiful and cute he is….Jin jokes about they being Akakame….and without noticing, Kame’s legs moved on their own in hasty steps hugging Jin from behind.



End of Chapter 21

fangirlpaoktsou on December 15th, 2010 09:37 pm (UTC)
omg!! kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!! omg!! akame is love, well tomapi too!! but AKAME IS LOVE!!
i want them together again!! girl you just kille me at the end!!
please continue!! it's more than awesome!! love love love it!!
Garnetgarnet_light on December 15th, 2010 09:51 pm (UTC)
You're FIRST and FAST! LOL!! *gives u choco and cupcakes*

I'm glad you loved it!
Well, I'm a tease so I love to make my endings cliffhanger
I will continue dear...don't worry ^___^
Thanks alot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*

hinatah on December 15th, 2010 10:07 pm (UTC)
Yay for TomaPi!
But the AKame part was better. I really liked the fact that Kame acted based solely upon his heart's choice. Seems like, for once, Jin made the right move in this part. XD

Love it!
Garnetgarnet_light on December 15th, 2010 11:26 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you loved it all, but I also prefer the akame part ~
yes, I actually think Jin did ^__^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear *hugs back*
nikkimatteinikkimattei on December 15th, 2010 10:18 pm (UTC)

Yes!!! Toma and Yamapi are together, so kawaii!!!

And AKAME is so close...waiting for next chapter <3
Garnetgarnet_light on December 15th, 2010 11:28 pm (UTC)
Yes, they finally are~
and akame are love ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie ^__^
アグスティンagustin1982 on December 15th, 2010 10:36 pm (UTC)
I hope akame will be together again xD Uwaaa kame hug Jin xD Update soon ne *HUGS*
Garnetgarnet_light on December 15th, 2010 11:29 pm (UTC)
You'll see soon if they are back or not! Hehehehe~
yes, Kame actually hugged Jin.....they're just love ne~~
I will do my best to update soon
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear *hugs back*
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Garnetgarnet_light on December 15th, 2010 11:32 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you did ne~
You'll see in the next chapter dear ^_^
yes it sure was, but I bet the ending made u forget all about the heartbreaking scene
TomaPi are love as well as Akame
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting hon *hugs*
starg8fan_liz: akame icon 2starg8fan_liz on December 15th, 2010 11:08 pm (UTC)
XD yay Kame hugged him ^__^ it's a start XD
looking forward to the next chap XD♥♥♥♥
Garnetgarnet_light on December 15th, 2010 11:39 pm (UTC)
Yes he did ^___^
it sure is a good start
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
will do my best to update soon~
bellemelody: akame sexybellemelody on December 16th, 2010 12:09 am (UTC)
thank you)) going to read)
truongthuyquynhtruongthuyquynh on December 16th, 2010 01:34 am (UTC)
Oh, you left us at a critical cliff, author-san. D:
Cannot wait for the next chapter for their making-up. XD XD
Thanks for sharing this ne.
sunflower_1108sunflower_1108 on December 16th, 2010 01:53 am (UTC)
>>>and without noticing, kame's leg moved on their own in hasty steps hugging jin from behind --->>>> omg, i'm so happy *grinning*
finally, tomapi back together, right???? ^~^
waiting what jin will do as soon as kazu hugged him??? *stupid grin*
thanks for sharing ^3^
dorayaki_chandorayaki_chan on December 16th, 2010 02:13 am (UTC)
Yaaaaaaaay what the use of look back in anger right ???? So does it mean that this story is gonna end soon???
malu78malu78 on December 16th, 2010 02:23 am (UTC)
First Tomapi finally be reconciled.
Second I hope Kame Jin and begin to resolve conflicts.
Third, what is that I do not like jhonny-san has a video.
And Fourth tell you that I loved the episode.

La Fee Verteabsinthe1213 on December 16th, 2010 03:53 am (UTC)
sometimes, the heart has the better decision...
ღ~♥ Yuki ♥~ღkame_kiyumi on December 16th, 2010 04:59 am (UTC)
ahhh~ finally some certain good moves, Kame! It's time! Haha!
lost_sky6lost_sky6 on December 16th, 2010 05:04 am (UTC)
YAY~!!!!!!!! Kame is hugging Jin~ it's good! LOL mou~ but I have a feeling he will be stubborn again >__< Just give Jin a chance, Kame~ He has suffered so much >__<
and yay~ tomapi made up ^__^

Can't wait for the next chapter~!!
Isyya  和 仁 Yuuki k2jis_kazuchan on December 16th, 2010 06:57 am (UTC)
jin and kame are destiny....
jin don't give up kay...