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07 December 2010 @ 11:58 pm
[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch20  


Chapter 20



First day after Jin leave, 2006


Maru: Is he ok?

Koki: Not really…I mean he smiles and pretend that he’s all great, but I know that he’s not….

Ueda: Should we call Jin and tell him about this? After all, they were best friends

Maru: I’m not sure if that’s a good idea at the moment

Taguchi: Me neither….not after their fight that day….things seem bad between them

Ueda: Yeah *sighs*

Koki: Guys, I should tell you something....

Taguchi: What is it?

Koki: Kame made me promise not to tell you this, but I think you all should know….He’s been getting unconscious a lot lately…..like 2 days ago, we were laughing and all of a sudden he passed out….he almost doesn’t eat anything and when the staff forces him to…I noticed how he runs to the bathroom afterwards, so I followed him and saw him throwing up the food…I’m really worried

Maru: Is he throwing up in purpose?

Koki: I don’t know, but I don’t think so…

Ueda: I’m not sure what difference does that make anyway Maru!

Maru: There is a big difference, you just don’t see it yet..

*Ueda’s phone ringing*

Ueda: Hello Manager-san

Manager: Hello Ueda…where are you now?

Ueda: In the dressing room, why?

Manager: Tell all the members to come to Sanno hospital

Ueda: *confused* why?

Manager: Kamenashi passed out in a photoshoot

Ueda: OMG! Is he ok?

Manager: The Dr. said he’s very weak so he attached an IV drops to him… and Johnny-san has given me some instructions that I need to tell you about, so please come ASAP

Ueda: We’re coming right now!




During 1 Pound no Fukuin, 2008


Kame looking with cold piercing eyes at Jin

Kame: He knows what? *still shooting death glares at Jin*

Jin: *Jin freaked out from the sudden change of Kame’s attitude and thought he made a huge mistake blurting that out* h-he…

Kame: WHAT THE HELL DOES HE KNOW?!! *Kame’s shouted in anger while standing and looking at Jin*

Jin: *Jin became nervous and once he saw Kame’s cold eyes he averted his right away….he knew he blew it up* h-he knows….about what happened that day…

Kame: *started to tremble from nervousness* you’re kidding, right?

Jin: I wish *not being able to meet Kame’s eyes*

Kame: D-don’t tell me…you blurted that out to Johnny-san when you were drunk too!! *Kame said in a scary tone*

Jin: I wish…then he won’t have….”Maybe I should just close my mouth….Shit…Kame reverted back…Why the hell did I open my mouth about that! Stupid me…”

Kame: H-how then?

Jin: *looking down at his hands like it’s the most interesting thing to look at* he has a video…

Kame: *confused* Video? Of what?

Jin: *gulped* He bugged the hotel room Kazuya….He has video of that day….

Kame’s eyes widen in shock and he felt like his legs are going to give up on him. He tried to walk slowly to reach the couch, but his legs gave up on him and he sat on the floor with a blank face….He couldn’t believe what he was hearing….Johnny-san knew…..all this time he knew….he has a video too….who else knows….Yamapi also knows….maybe our manager also knows…..what am I going to do…..what am I supposed to do….Kame was truly lost not knowing what to think anymore….

 Jin: *hurried to Kame’s side and helped Kame to stand up and sit on the couch, it shocked him that the latter didn’t even protest…Jin knelt on the floor while looking at Kame’s blank face* Kazu *trying to reach his hand to his cheek*

Kame: *got out from his trance once he heard his name been called…he slapped Jin’s hand away from him* don’t even dare to touch me!!

Jin: *averted his eyes from Kazuya’s cold ones* s-sorry

Kame: Leave!

Jin: *taken back* but Kazu I—

Kame: It’s Kamenashi to you!!

Jin: I’m not leaving!

Kame: *pushed Jin away and stood up walking toward the door of his apartment* leave now!

 Jin: *didn’t move from his place* I didn’t finish yet!

Kame: *Kame blew up shouting* Why the hell did you come here for? Just leave me alone!!

Jin: I want to fix things between us Kazu!!

Kame: *laughs mocking Jin* our friendship is over Akanishi….Nothing will ever be the same between us…There is no us anymore…..There is nothing to fix between us….

Jin: I never said I wanted our friendship back… I don’t want things to be like it used to be between us….Yes, I want us to talk like we used to….but I don’t want us to be just friends….just friends won’t do…

Kame: *in anger tone* you’re definitely not a friend Akanishi….nor anything….I told you before….you mean nothing to me….just like a black dot on my notebook….I erased you from my life, why can’t you do the same?

Jin: Because I love you!

Kame: *his heart skipped a beat, but his face didn’t change* I’m tired of hearing that already!

Jin: It’s the truth….I truly love you….since the time we were filming Gokusen 2 together….since the time I bought those rings for us…

Kame’s heart was beating like a crazy on the mention of the rings....He missed those times…

Kame: *looking straight into Jin’s eyes* those rings had no meaning!

Jin: It meant the world to me….I bought them so that we have something that bonds us together!

Kame: Liar….that wasn’t what you said…

Jin: I don’t remember what I said, but I’m pretty sure it was a stupid reason….but the truth is….I loved you since that time and I still love you…

Kame’s face had confusion written all over it…..all this time he thought….he was used by the person he loved and thrown away….he thought he was maybe a replacement for Yamapi…..he thought he was nothing to Jin for being treated that way…..He thought those rings meant the world to him, but not to Jin….He don’t know what to believe or think right now……he was totally confused….and his confusion grew more when Jin opened him mouth to drop words he didn’t know how to answer….

Jin: Can’t we start again?

Kame eyes widen in shock from the question and he kept staring at Jin not knowing how to answer



End of Chapter 20

nikkimatteinikkimattei on December 7th, 2010 08:09 pm (UTC)
Ahhh!!! Its getting good. Can't wait for the next chapter
Garnetgarnet_light on December 7th, 2010 08:14 pm (UTC)
Re: First!!!
First, you're FIRST!! *gives u cupcake and choco*

Second, I'm glad it does!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ^__^
lovekame02lovekame02 on December 7th, 2010 08:24 pm (UTC)
woah me wants more!!!
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:26 pm (UTC)
I will try to update soon ^^
thanks a lot for reading
Konoyatokoyam1 on December 7th, 2010 08:28 pm (UTC)
why you not make them together soon..
this is starting make me confused...

thank you for make them..
and please update soon~
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:27 pm (UTC)
Just wait and see ne~
thanks a lot for readi and commenting ^__^
jamie_spottyjamie_spotty on December 7th, 2010 09:24 pm (UTC)
Uwahhhh...now that Kame knows that Johnny knows everything how will he react to it?? What will he do? I hope he and Jin can reconcile and get back at Johnny in some way. But Jin needs to do some serious groveling first!

I seriously can't wait for the next chap!!! I'm so glad of the fast updates!!

Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:49 pm (UTC)
You'll see in the next chapter ne~~
let's just hope akame will be together
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear
Luv u too
malu78malu78 on December 7th, 2010 09:43 pm (UTC)
Great, I love it.
Jin's statement, finally had the courage to tell kame.

Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:50 pm (UTC)
Re: Hi
Jin finally grew up enough to say his true feelings
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ^___^
Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on December 7th, 2010 09:46 pm (UTC)
!@#%^%#$%. WHUT!!!!? O__O
oh wait. i remember now. XDDD

how did johnny got that video dangg. someone spied on kazuya or somthing?

oh boy i got feeling that kazuya's rage coming up and might punch jin's face XD
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:52 pm (UTC)
Johnny bugged their hotel room, so thats how he got a video of what happened
Well, lets see in the next chapter ne *winks*
thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
(no subject) - ueda_fangirl on December 10th, 2010 12:00 am (UTC) (Expand)
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Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:53 pm (UTC)
Yeah, it's better if he does ne~~
Im glad you loved it ^__^
thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear
whitepure_lovewhitepure_love on December 7th, 2010 11:29 pm (UTC)
this is really good!!!!
so glad you update this fast... i'm wait for next chapter...
thx u so much :D
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:54 pm (UTC)
I'm glad u liked it! ^__^
thanks a lot for reading and commenting
dorayaki_chandorayaki_chan on December 8th, 2010 01:26 am (UTC)
I can see.the potential of things to get better yaaaay
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:55 pm (UTC)
Yes, there is definitely a chance for things to be better
Let's hope for the best
Thanks a lot for reading
sekkiboosekkiboo on December 8th, 2010 02:51 am (UTC)
Jin, gambatte!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~!!
but Errr omg, johnny have a video?!!! it`s creepy :|

Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:56 pm (UTC)
Yes, Lets hope things will be better
Johnny kept the video ne...he sure is creepy
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ^_^
starg8fan_liz: akame icon 2starg8fan_liz on December 8th, 2010 02:58 am (UTC)
yay new chap!! wow Kame was really bad off. hope they can start over again XD♥♥♥ looking forward to the next chap ^__^
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:57 pm (UTC)
Yeah, he sure was ne~~
hope the same too ^_^
thanks a lot for reading and commenting
La Fee Verteabsinthe1213 on December 8th, 2010 03:16 am (UTC)
jin asking for another chance...
hope he won't blow it this time...
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 04:58 pm (UTC)
Yeah, lets hope he won't blow it this time and for Kame to accept
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting
Ley Kameley_kame on December 8th, 2010 03:18 am (UTC)
hello I do not speak English but I love your fic, I'm your fan and all your fics are great ^^
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 05:00 pm (UTC)
Hello there ^__^
I hope the English is easy for you to understand
I'm glad you love it!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! Hope you will continue reading my fics in the future!
Its an honor for me to know that my fics are liked by someone dear
(no subject) - ley_kame on December 8th, 2010 05:14 pm (UTC) (Expand)
sunflower_1108sunflower_1108 on December 8th, 2010 03:34 am (UTC)
short but very interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now, u make me confuse what kazu-chan will do after he heard jin say about his feeling. he will confess or keep running away and push jinjin????
and, what???? kazu-chan passed out in the photoshoot??? omg, jin will worry about him very much, neh???
thank for sharing and waiting the next chap
*hug u* ^~^
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 05:02 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you think so ^_^
lets hope for the best ne~
you'll see whats going to happen in the next chapter
Yeah, he did...he was in a prettty bad shape ne~
thanks a lot for reading and commenting *hugs u back*
mia_almaemmusik2304 on December 8th, 2010 05:01 am (UTC)
thank u so much for the update.
i like this
can't wait the new chapter
Garnetgarnet_light on December 8th, 2010 05:03 pm (UTC)
My pleasure dear
I'm glad u liked it
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ^_^