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23 November 2010 @ 06:04 am
[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch18  

Title: The Wrong Move
: Akame (main), TomaPi, Ryoda
: R
Romance, Angst, Smut.
 When Jin thought that he can finally put the past behind him, it came back hunting him. Will it stop hunting him one day?
I don't own any characters from Johnny's Entertainment, but I wish I own Kame!!
Author Note: This fic jumps on time from the past to the present and back to the past again. I hope it won't get you confused! Feel free to ask anything if it did and read previous chapters in case you forgotten the plot! \(^o^)/

Previous Chapters:
Prologue, Chapter1, Chapter2, Chapter3, Chapter4, Chapter5, Chapter6, Chapter7, Chapter8, Chapter9, Chapter10, Chapter11, Chapter12, Chapter13, Chapter14, Chapter15, Chapter 16, Chapter17

Chapter 18


December, 2007


Jin: What’s wrong with you lately?

Pi: Nothing *drinks his tequila*

Jin: You’ve been drinking a lot recently and your always gloomy….It’s like I’m seeing an image of me, why?

Pi: ……………..

Jin: “Don’t tell me!” Is everything ok between you and Toma?

Pi: *sighs* w-we..broke up *Pi felt pain just from mentioning the word…it didn’t feel right*


Pi: 2 weeks ago

Jin: WHY?

Pi: He wants some time alone away from me *looks at Jin in the face* I don’t blame him Jin….It’s been a long time since the last time I truly was there for him *averting his eyes looking at his drink*

Jin: *frustrated and gulps a shot from his drink* It’s because of me, isn’t it?

Pi: No…it’s all because of me…I neglected him way too much…

Jin: That’s because you were helping me….I’m really sorry Pi! I messed up my life and yours too!

Pi: That should be my line….I messed up yours too….I even got in Kame’s black list…

Jin: Huh? What do you mean?

Pi: I’m sorry for not telling you this earlier….but *feeling nervous* well…..I went to him to try and explain things to him…

Jin: *his eyes widen in shock* YOU WHAT???

Pi: I’m sorry Jin, I just wanted to help you

Jin: *gulping down his drink* But I told you not to interfere Pi! He might misunderstand everything!!

Pi: He did….He thought that we are scheming evil plans against him…and laughing behind his back…

Jin: SHIT!! SHIT!! DAMN IT PI!! I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN!! *gulps down the rest of his drink*

Pi: I’m sorry….I screwed up big time….both your relation and mine….it’s all my fault…If it weren’t for that kiss to start with, you wouldn’t taste this agony feelings and I……I might have not lost Toma *tears start to fall*

Jin: *sighs heavily* don’t worry Pi, you and Toma will definitely get back together….I just know it!

Pi: Yeah right *gulps down the rest of his drink in one shot* I’m not sure I believe that anymore…

Jin: You’ll see! Now let’s leave….I need to think of a way to talk with Kazu…




After 3 days from the end of Real Face Tour, 2006


Koki: What the hell was that about?

Kame: Leave me alone Koki!

Koki: Well I can’t do that….that bakanishi asked one of us to come and check on you

Kame: *heart beating fast and feeling guilty*

Koki: To think he would ask something like that after you beat the crap out of him *sighs*

Kame: He deserved it!

Koki: *smiles* I bet or else you wouldn’t blow up like that…not to him anyway

Kame: What’s that supposed to mean?

Koki: It means you two are bunch of idiots….you better apologize to him Kame-chan!

Kame: “As if! He violated me and I’m supposed to apologize for punching him for doing so..How ironic!”

Koki: What happened between you two?

Kame: None of your business, so could you please leave me alone now?

Koki: Fine fine….but I’m just saying….your fights are useless because you two care about each other way too much or else, you wouldn’t be feeling this guilty right now….

Kame: Fuck off Koki!! *Koki smirks for hitting the right spot while leaving in hasty steps scared from getting some of Kame’s wrath*


“Shit, I hit him pretty bad….but he deserve it! He just got on my nerves…I was trying to ignore everything that happened and ignore him, but he wouldn’t just let it slide….and even saying sorry after what he did….like sorry could solve everything…….FUCK!.....he looked shocked…..I truly hurt him *clenched his fist in a tight grip*




During 1 Pound no Fukuin, 2008


Jin: I don’t have a reason Kazu….I acted without thinking….all I had in mind was having you at that time….I just couldn’t control myself anymore.

Kame: I can’t forgive you Jin!

Jin: *with begging eyes* can’t you at least try?

Kame: *ignoring Jin and pushing him away* I need to forget in order to forgive and that’s impossible…

Jin was looking at Kame not knowing what to do or say anymore until he remembered a certain person….He remembered his reason to come here….so he sighed heavily and started to talk…

Jin: I lied that day Kazu…

Kame: *snorts* you always lie, what’s new?!

Jin: Please hear me out without any comments…*getting nervous* I never asked Pi to try sleeping with me

Kame: *Taken back by what Jin said* w-what?

Jin: It never even cross my mind to ask him….I have no idea why I blurted that out that day….I was stupid! Maybe I thought you will agree if I actually mentioned Pi…..I have no idea what the hell was I thinking….My head was truly in a mess that day….

Kame: Stop lying Jin! I know that Yamapi knows about what happened!!

Jin: That’s because I was dead drunk couple of months ago and I blurted it out to him

Kame: *raising an eyebrow* When couple of months ago?

Jin: Maybe in May or June…

Kame: *mumbling* after you came back

Jin: I was hitting the clubs and drinking all the time….it kind of happened one of those days….sorry….

Kame: *looked away trying to show a straight face, but actually feeling happy about that new information he just learned about*

Jin: Pi punched me real bad afterwards

Kame: You deserve it!

Jin: I know….I just….it made me realize how bad I messed up…

Kame: I don’t get one thing Jin….Why now? Why do you want to fix things now?

Jin: It’s not just now Kazu…I’ve been trying to do so since I got back, but you never give me the chance to do so…

Kame: *with accusing eyes* because instead of fixing it when it happened, you actually ran away to LA

Jin: It wasn’t my choice!

Kame: Yeah right!

Jin: I swear….Johnny-san forced me to go!

Kame: *eyes widen in surprise* Huh?

Jin: I didn’t have a choice but to leave or else *Jin averted his eyes away from Kame*

Kame: Or else what?

Jin: ………

Kame: *in higher tone* or else what??

Jin: *Jin looked at Kame and when they eyes met, Jin averted his eyes* He knows Kazu

Kame: *eyes widen in shock*


End of Chapter 18


I'm extremely sorry for taking a break from writing without even telling you guys. Sometimes, life get the best of us and it did to me....Recently, I reached a point where I truly missed writing and so here I am again....I can't promise you a fast update as my life is still in a mess right now....but I have a feeling that the next update will be pretty soon, hehehehehe~
I hope you still remember this fic and enjoy this chapter. Comments are love <3

dorayaki_chandorayaki_chan on November 23rd, 2010 03:30 am (UTC)
Woooow yaaaay so glad that you are back , hope pi and toma is gonna be just fine :) I can see things is getting a bit brighter between jin and kazu :))
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:48 am (UTC)
Hey dear
I'm glad toe back as well, hehehehehehe~~
yes, I hope Tomapi will be able to fix things between them ne~
and who knows how things will end up with akame
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
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Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:49 am (UTC)
I'm glad u do ^____^
will try to update soon ne~~
thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear
Eliana Afifwneliana on November 23rd, 2010 03:57 am (UTC)
it's been a while since the last update ne..but it's worth waiting..thanx for updating..really wait for da next one..
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:50 am (UTC)
Yes, its been a while ne~
I'm glad u think so and glad u liked it!
Will try to update soon ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
malu78malu78 on November 23rd, 2010 04:36 am (UTC)

I just finished reading the chapters of the story.
I wanted to say I loved it as you type.
Also it is very interesting.

Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:51 am (UTC)
Re: hi
Hey there! I'm glad u started to follow this fic ^^
I'm so happy u loved and hopefully u will continue reading it till the end..
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting *hugs*
kazu_chan_love: kazuya♥kazu_chan_love on November 23rd, 2010 06:10 am (UTC)
im glad you updated...^^

i felt sad for pi and toma
i hope everything will be fine soon

thanks for updating♥♥♥
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:52 am (UTC)
I'm happy that I did,finally....
I hope so too dear~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
truongthuyquynhtruongthuyquynh on November 23rd, 2010 06:17 am (UTC)
It's been a while since you last updated, ne.
Thanks so much for sharing this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:56 am (UTC)
Yeah, its been a long time....sorry for the late update
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear
Will try my best to update soon ^_^
mae0513mae0513 on November 23rd, 2010 06:39 am (UTC)

nwe chapty~~~~ kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

i miss this one so much~~

thanks for the update~
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:57 am (UTC)
Hey dear, I'm glad ur still reading this fic
I missed this fic too, that's why I'm back and determined to finish it before vanishing again, lol!
I hope u enjoyed reading it!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
Yuuki Saya: hyphen_blueyuuki_saya on November 23rd, 2010 07:43 am (UTC)
UPDATE!! Yeah!!

So... Now it's funny and twisted and I think that it should make Akame closer... I need Akame love... ;)
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 11:59 am (UTC)
Yes, it sure is getting twisted and what's not....let's just wait and see ne~
I need akame love as well, hehehehehehe~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear
ღ~♥ Yuki ♥~ღkame_kiyumi on November 23rd, 2010 08:59 am (UTC)
ahh I missed this fic~ and an update! Yay! :)
But... whats gonna happen to Kame and jin now that Kame knew the old man knew about it too. :(
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 12:01 pm (UTC)
Yup, I finally updated this ne~
and I truly missed this fic as well
Let's see what's going to happen and hope for the better!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
nana_lytama on November 23rd, 2010 11:32 am (UTC)
I would never forget this fic^^
I missed you and missed this fic, too! Glad you're backXD

Another great chapter! Do I sense some hope there at the end? I mean before Jin blurted out that Johnny knows... T_T That of course makes things complicated but maybe Kame considers to forgive Jin sooner or later?

Thank you for updating^^ I enjoyed this a lot as usual^__^
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 12:04 pm (UTC)
I'm glad u didn't! I missed this fic too and missed all of u dear readers...
I'm so happy to be back again, determined to finish this fic before vanishing again, lol!
Yeah, I guess there was hope, but not sure how Kazu will react to that new tip...
I'm glad u enjoyed it! ^__^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*
ClarieWinchesterakameangel on November 23rd, 2010 01:27 pm (UTC)
wow .. update!!

Pin = bakas

They really messed up each other's life.
I hope Toma will forgive Pi soon. And Kazuya also forgive Jin.

Thanks for sharing.
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 07:06 pm (UTC)
Yea they definitely are stupid ne~
Yeah, I hope so too
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ^__^
sekkiboosekkiboo on November 23rd, 2010 01:57 pm (UTC)
omg! just as I thought, that`s it.. Johnny knows about them :( please Oh kazu forgive Jinjin.. hihi
I felt sorry for pi *hugs*

Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 07:07 pm (UTC)
I hope he will forgive Jin
Yeah, I feel sorry for both Pi and Jin
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear ^___^
sunflower_1108sunflower_1108 on November 23rd, 2010 02:52 pm (UTC)
love u, love u, love u!!!! ^^
*hug u tight* ^3^
yeah, waiting for so long, but finally u update *stupid grin*
hope u wll fine soon, fight-oh, neh????? ^^
once again, love u!! ^^
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 07:09 pm (UTC)
*blushes and hugs u back tightly*
thanks a lot, hope u enjoyed reading!
Thanks....I will keep the faith ^____^
thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear *hugs*
(no subject) - sunflower_1108 on November 24th, 2010 12:07 am (UTC) (Expand)
Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on November 23rd, 2010 03:31 pm (UTC)
ilu ♥♥♥ &glad ur back :D

ill comment later first reading now XDD
Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on November 23rd, 2010 04:00 pm (UTC)
ok ive read it. and i was shockingg momentss
poor them johnny loves to tear lovely pairs apart =_=""
(no subject) - garnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 07:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - ueda_fangirl on November 23rd, 2010 08:53 pm (UTC) (Expand)
rikitor1k1t0 on November 23rd, 2010 03:51 pm (UTC)
Waaa~ Now Kame knows.. What's gonna happen then!? O.O
Hope Pi and Toma will patch up things soon.. Poor Pi~
Thanks for the update!! :D
Garnetgarnet_light on November 23rd, 2010 07:15 pm (UTC)
Yaaaa,I wonder what will happen too, lol!
I hope they will! I feel sorry for Pi ne~
thanks a lot for reading and commenting ^__^