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29 April 2010 @ 06:35 pm
[Fic] Forbidden Love - Ch5 Part 2  

Part 2

Kazuya: *embarrassed and nervous* can’t you switch off the lights first?

Jin: No way! *tried to take the pants off again, but was stopped by Kazuya’s hands again*

Kazuya: But its embarrassing Jin!

Jin: *sighs and puts both his hands on his lover cheeks* only at the beginning, but that won’t even matter later!

Kazuya: *puts his hands on tops of Jin’s* But, can’t you switch off the lights for now at least?

Jin: *in a firm tone while locking eyes with Kazuya* let go Kazu!    

Kazuya: *nods and averts his eyes away*

Jin smiled gently at Kazuya and he started kissing Kazuya on the cheeks, the nose, the forehead, closed eyes and the lips making the younger boy melt in those kisses and get distracted to sneak his hands and take off the pants in a fast move shocking Kazuya who didn’t notice until Jin was pulling the pants throwing it away on the floor.

Kazuya: *trying to hide his length* JIN!!

Jin: *taking off his own pants* there is nothing to be embarrassed about between us Kazu!

Nervousness kicked in again in Kazuya’s system when he saw Jin naked frame and saw how hard Jin was. Jin was well built and he definitely had a big length. Kazuya started to panic when he remembered the gay porn videos he watched. Won’t this hurt him? Does Jin know how to well prepare him?

As if Jin could read Kazuya’s thoughts and feel his dilemma. He approached him slowly with careful steps not wanting to scare him off and returned back Kazuya’s hair behind his ear before holding his chin and lifting his head up to meet his. He locked eyes with the younger boy whose eyes filled with nervousness and fear.

Jin: Are you having second thoughts?

Kazuya: I’m….I……..I’m scared……I never….

Jin: Want me to tell you a secret?

Kazuya: What?

Jin: I’m scared too

Kazuya: Liar! It’s not like it’s your first time!

Jin: You want me to tell you another secret?

Kazuya: Jin?

Jin: It is my first time!

Kazuya: *locked eyes with Jin to see if the older was kidding or lying to him, but he couldn’t find any* but, those girls…how?

Jin: I never slept with those girls! I couldn’t! I wasn’t able to! All I could think about was you! That’s why I told you that I was sure of my decision because I tried everything I could to forget you, but nothing worked out!

Kazuya: So, you never?

Jin: *shakes his head* so, it’s not just you who is afraid! I feel the same!

Kazuya: But you seem…calm!

Jin: *takes Kazuya’s hand and place it on top of his heart* does that sound calm to you?

Kazuya: *laughs* well, this definitely makes me feel better.

Jin: Why you little! *jumps on Kazuya, both giggling, but when they lock eyes together, they start kissing insanely while grinding their lengths moaning in their kiss*

Jin broke the kiss and he reached his hand to bed table for the lube and went back to kissing Kazuya again. Then, he descended downwards till he was on the same level as Kazuya’s length. Kazuya knowing what Jin was about to do, grabbed Jin head stopping him.

Kazuya: Stop it! It’s dirty there!

Jin: *runs a hand on Kazuya’s cheek* nothing in you is dirty!

Kazuya: No Jin! Seriously, don’t! Unless I will do the same for you!

Jin: *smiles sweetly* you’re so cute Kazu, but I have to reject your offer, maybe next time though!

Jin stops Kazuya’s hands by taking them first in his hands while kissing the younger boy trying to distract him. Then, he places the younger boy hands on the mattress and places his hands on tops of his firmly.  He finally starts to descend downwards toward Kazuya’s length when he felt the younger boy trying to pull his hands from Jin’s, but the younger had it in a strong grip. Jin didn’t know how to start and knew he needed at least one hand, but he figured once Kazuya got to know how it feels like, then he will probably forget everything he said moments ago. So, he proceeded and started to lick Kazuya’s length teasingly on the top making the younger boy moan. He lifted his hands from Kazuya’s who had a strong grip on the mattress, panting heavily.

Jin used one of his hands to pump Kazuya’s length while the other was touching his balls. He went back to licking it again and started sucking Kazuya’s length a little bit. He focused on sucking the mushroom head to stop for a while and heard a whimper coming from his younger lover. He brought the bottle of lube and poured a great amount on his fingers and his boyfriend hole which made the younger boy twitch.

Jin: *locking eyes with Kazuya* tell me if you want me to stop

Kazuya: *gulps and nods*

Jin plays around Kazuya’s hole before he finally inserts the first finger and to his delight, Kazuya try his best to hold back his tears and handle it. He inserted the second finger and to his shock, Kazuya screamed loudly.

Jin: *stops immediately and takes out his fingers and start to panic* are you Kazu?

Kazuya: *nods trying to hold back his tears* I didn’t tell you to stop!

Jin: Well, you scared me! *lets out a breath of relief*

Kazuya: It hurts Jin! I never knew it hurts like this!

Jin: Just at the beginning Kazu! Tell me if this helps!

Jin start licking and sucking on Kazuya’s length making him shudder. He poured more lube and started inserting the first finger again making Kazuya hiss in pain, but Jin focused on licking Kazuya’s length tip and it made Kazuya moan in pleasure. Jin inserted the second finger while sucking on Kazuya’s length and soon the third followed eliciting moans and incoherent mumbles from Kazuya. After thinking that Kazuya’s hole has been well prepared, Jin removed 2 fingers and left just one trying to search on the spot that will make the younger boy go crazy. He stopped his ministrations on Kazuya’s length which earned him a whimper and a dazed lustful look from the younger.

Kazuya: *shuddered* AHHHH!

Jin: Found you!

Kazuya: Stop Jin! Ahhhhh! It feels weird…

Jin: Maybe weird, but good..

Kazuya was in a daze moaning incoherently after his prostate being touched multiple times. Jin couldn’t continue his ministrations anymore; he wanted to feel his Kazuya now. So, he started coating his own length with a big amount of lube and placed a pillow under Kazuya’s back and head. He positioned himself and put Kazuya’s legs on his shoulder.

Kazuya: *pouting* Why should my legs be on your shoulder?

Jin: It makes me slide inside you faster. I think it won’t hurt as much.

Kazuya: *blushes* If you say so

Jin: Ready? *Kazuya nods*

Kazuya: *Jin enters him* AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! IT HURTS JIN!! GOD! IT HURTS!! *tears start falling*

Jin: *kisses Kazuya on the lips and finally goes inside Kazuya completely* Kazu look at me! *Kazuya look at him while tears still falling* does it still hurt?

Kazuya: Yes and I hate this position!

Jin: Why? What do you have in mind? *caress his cheeks*

Kazuya: I don’t know! But I can’t even wrap my hands over your neck! *pouts*

Jin: *laughs* this might hurt *slide down Kazuya’s legs to his waist* is that good now?

Kazuya: *nods and wraps his hands over Jin’s neck* Yeah! *smiles* Please be gentle!

Jin: I should be the one saying that Kazu not you! You’re the one who always make me lose my control anyway!

Kazuya: *bite on his lips* sorry

Jin: you know, I’m happy to keep chatting like this, but I can’t anymore! Can I move?

Kazuya: *gulps and nods*

Jin starts to thrust inside of Kazuya slowly diving inside the heat while Kazuya was still hissing in little pain and gasping, but soon moans of pleasure was coming out from his mouth. Jin loved what he’s seeing, Kazuya underneath him, hair messy sticking up, eyes closed, face moving from a side to another and he was hearing sounds that were new to him made by his younger lover. Kazuya would pull Jin’s face from time to time in a heated kiss that would muffle their moans especially Kazuya’s whose moans were very loud.

Jin could feel Kazuya is closer to the edge, so he fastened his thrust pace trying to find the previous spot earlier and a loud cry was heard from Kazuya and Jin knew he found it. So, he focused his thrusts on that spot and in a very fast pace making Kazuya cry louder and louder. Kazuya’s walls started clenching on Jin’s and Jin knew that he was there, so he kept his ministrations, but added kissing Kazuya with every thrust. Kazuya was in too much pleasure; he felt himself tensing and knew he was close.

 Kazuya: Jin! I’m commgfp

Jin: *Kazuya couldn’t complete because Jin interrupted him with a kiss* then, come for me Kazu! *in a husky voice*

Kazuya: Jin! *tighten his hold on Jin’s neck* Ahhhhhhhhhh *shudders while he shoots his white fluid in their stomach *

Jin: *Kazuya’s walls squeeze him* God, you’re so tight Kazu!

Kazuya: *breaths heavily trying to come back from his high* kiss me!

Jin: *kisses him passionately while tongues involved still thrusting inside of his Kazuya* ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Kazu! *shoots his fluids inside of his lover*

Jin drops on Kazuya’s body while the younger boy wraps his hands over the older boy’s waist. Jin nuzzles into Kazuya’s neck kissing the soft skin. Then he just leaned into his neck and stayed still doing nothing, but enjoying the warmth of their joined body. He wanted to stay like this a little bit longer. 

Kazuya: *in a husky voice* It’s perfect!

Jin: *confused, so he pushed himself a little up to see his lover eyes* Huh?

Kazuya: I’m answering your previous question which I’m saving you the trouble of asking! *giggles*

Jin: *grins brightly* so, perfect?

Kazuya: *nods while blushing* perfect! *locked eyes with Jin* I love you Jin!

Jin: I love you my Kazu! *kisses Kazuya slowly on the lips, tasting him thoroughly*

Kazuya: *moans* Jin!

Jin: *smirks* I guess we’re both up for another round, don’t you think?

And soon, moans filled the room till they finally ended up lying on the bed dead exhausted. 

Jin: We need to clean up!

Kazuya: I rather sleep!

Jin: C’mon, I’ll give you a bath Kazu!

Kazuya: W-what? No way!! *Jin carried him bridal style* Hold on! Jin!! *pouts*

Jin: I’ve been dying to take a bath together again! It’s been a long time since we last took a bath together!  *grins*

Kazuya: We were kids! *seeing how excited Jin about the bath smiled* only a bath though!

Jin: *smirks* you thought I wanted to have sex in the bathroom?

Kazuya: *blushes* No! I didn’t say that! I just said that no more weird thoughts!

Jin: *laughs* Just admit it Kazu!

Kazuya: Well, you can’t blame me! You just sexed me up twice and it’s my first time!

Jin: And you can’t blame me when I have a cute boyfriend like you who I can’t resist to jump on!

Kazuya: *laughs loudly which rings in the bathroom* Ok you win!

Jin: Don’t I always?

Kazuya: *pouts* what’s that supposed to mean?

Jin: *whispers* It means I won the best thing in this world called KA-ZU-YA!!

Kazuya: *giggles* Jin! Stop it already!

Jin: *chuckles* why should I?

Kazuya went quiet all of a sudden thinking deeply. He forgot for a while about his parents and their circumstances. He stared at Jin who looked at him worried.

Jin: What’s wrong Kazu?

Kazuya: *holds Jin face to face his* listen Jin, you were right!

Jin: *confused* about what?

Kazuya: We need to make plans in case they find out about us. I don’t mind running away with you, so let’s decide on it together.

Jin: *kisses Kazuya passionately* I love you so much Kazu. Let’s decide on it tomorrow ok?

Kazuya: *nods* Ok!

Jin: Ok! Bath time!

Jin filled the tub with warm water and spilled Kazuya’s favorite shower bath. Kazuya was sitting in Jin’s lap and they both got relaxed in the bath soothed by the warm water. Kazuya leaned back into Jin’s chest enjoying Jin’s hands around his waist which he placed his hands over. He bends his head to look at Jin’s face and they both smiled to each other and kissed multiple times, their kisses calm, reassuring and soothing like their mood. Kazuya nuzzled his head into Jin’s neck while Jin rested his chin on Kazuya’s head. Both sighed from the nice warm feeling. Jin mentioned food, but Kazuya declined and slept immediately on Jin’s hand as a pillow while brought Jin’s other hand to his waist and nuzzled closer to Jin’s chest. They were sleeping on their sides facing each other and although the older boy was hungry, he didn’t have the heart to wake up Kazuya for food. He went in daze mesmerized by his beautiful younger lover and soon sleep crept in his system and he slept soundlessly forgetting all about food.


Chapter 6 : Emptiness

ClarieWinchesterakameangel on April 29th, 2010 03:09 pm (UTC)
Hot .. Hot ... Hot ...!!
A little uneasy for their age but Akame smut never fail to make me so hot.
Thanks for sharing.
I really hope the parent won't find out so soon. I can't get enough of Akame moment yet.
ClarieWinchesterakameangel on April 29th, 2010 03:10 pm (UTC)
Me First.............. First me.........
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Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 03:22 pm (UTC)
Yup, it is!! I love akame ~~
I'm happy you do! ^^
thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on April 29th, 2010 03:38 pm (UTC)

^^" sorry its a bit exagerating but DAMN!
thats H-O-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
8DDDDDDD akakame porn FTW! :D
Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 05:21 pm (UTC)
Well, that is an awesome reaction! LOL!
Hope you enjoyed the chapter sweetie ^^

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
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ღ~♥ Yuki ♥~ღkame_kiyumi on April 29th, 2010 03:44 pm (UTC)
eh!? They did it at such a young age eh? Hmm.....
ANyway waiting for the next update then~ =)
Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 05:22 pm (UTC)
Yup! Kazu was 13 and Jin was 15 then. They were pretty young ne, but definitely in love ~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
sari_pikapikasari_pikapika on April 29th, 2010 03:56 pm (UTC)
they did it!! now what will happen?? will their parents find out then??
thanks for the update...XD
Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 05:24 pm (UTC)
You'll see what's going to happen soon dear! In the next chapter ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
kame09: Kyohei Kamekame09 on April 29th, 2010 04:05 pm (UTC)

This fic is great~!
*shocked at the happenings* xD O_o
Love this! *thumbs up*


Can't wait for the next. <3

Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 05:25 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you loved it!! *hugs*
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie!
deeacrazymedeeacrazyme on April 29th, 2010 04:27 pm (UTC)
a 13 years old planning an escape
awesome mind, Kazuya!
go go go!
i wonder how their parents found out....
please update soon
Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 05:30 pm (UTC)
Yeah! They love each other that much ne~~
You'll see soon ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
mysticseasmysticseas on April 29th, 2010 04:39 pm (UTC)
Awwww this is do sweet and so hot!!! I love it!!! Thank you so much for the update!
Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 05:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks a lot! I'm so happy you loved it!!

Thanks for reading and commenting dear! ^^
annabella1988annabella1988 on April 29th, 2010 04:57 pm (UTC)
sweetie!! you update!
that was HOT! i love it, the way you write the smut always the best~
you know... I've got final exam tomorrow, and i should be studying.. but you make me read your fic and my roommate saw me giggling like mad. she even asks me what happen.. haha
thank you dear, you make my day.. i love this so much...
cant wait for the next..
will their parents found out?
thanks for sharing this lovely chapter dear...
gambate ne~
Garnetgarnet_light on April 29th, 2010 05:36 pm (UTC)
Yeah, sorry for being late and sorry for not being able to update the other fics! I got at the start of this week and I had so many things. Studying is giving me a hard time. >.<

I'm happy you loved it!! *hugs tight*
You remind me of myself, instead of studying I read fics since I don't have time to write.

I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! I wouldn't want to ruin it for you, so wait for the next chapter ne~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *chuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~*

Thanks hon! I will do my best! ^^
dorayaki_chandorayaki_chan on April 29th, 2010 05:47 pm (UTC)
Hwaaaaat and somehow I found it kind of cute X33
Garnetgarnet_light on April 30th, 2010 12:27 am (UTC)
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ^^
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
fangirlpaoktsou on April 29th, 2010 05:48 pm (UTC)
SO sweet and hot at the same time!!
can't wait for the next!!
keep oing my friend!
it's so nice!!
akame is love!!!

Garnetgarnet_light on April 30th, 2010 12:30 am (UTC)
Happy to hear that dear! ^^
Glad to see you enjoyed it! Yup! Akame are definitely love~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
I'll do my best in writing ne~~

アグスティンagustin1982 on April 29th, 2010 07:46 pm (UTC)
[Fic] Forbidden Love - Ch5 Part 2
Yatta...they do it for first time!! Hot!! Akame loveeee~ I love it! Thank youuu! Give you hugs~
Garnetgarnet_light on April 30th, 2010 12:32 am (UTC)
Re: [Fic] Forbidden Love - Ch5 Part 2
Yup, they did it ne~~
Akame are sure love ^^
I'm so happy you loved it!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs u back*
akameonlyakameonly on April 29th, 2010 10:21 pm (UTC)
Omfg for some reason this made me laugh so hard!!!! I can just imagine how loud kazu was!!! Bwahahaha! And I can't believe they kept a conversation going..during sex!

This was hot!!! Funny!!! And gahhhh!!!!!!
Garnetgarnet_light on April 30th, 2010 12:35 am (UTC)
Yup, Kazu was definitely loud! LOL!
And yes, they actually did keep a conversation going during sex, but I guess that's because of their age, lol!

I'm so happy you thought all that! I feel like I didn't fail in writing~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie~~
lost_sky6lost_sky6 on April 30th, 2010 03:49 am (UTC)
Hot!!! but kind of different since they're young XDD I wonder what their parents reaction will be when they found out...

Love this fic~!! Hope you update soon! Can't wait to read more!!
Garnetgarnet_light on April 30th, 2010 08:14 am (UTC)
Yup, it is because of their age ne~~
Well, let's wait and see.
I'm so happy you love it sweetie!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
mae0513mae0513 on April 30th, 2010 04:28 am (UTC)
love it thank u!!
Garnetgarnet_light on April 30th, 2010 08:16 am (UTC)
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay!! I'm glad you do!! ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear!