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23 March 2010 @ 01:34 pm
[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch15  

Title: The Wrong Move
: Akame (main), TomaPi, Ryoda
: R
Romance, Angst, Smut.
 When Jin thought that he can finally put the past behind him, it came back hunting him. Will it stop hunting him one day?
I don't own any characters from Johnny;s Entertainment, but I wish I own Kame.

Chapter 15


After 3 days from the end of Real Face Tour, 2006


~ In KAT-TUN dressing room ~

Everyone left to the set except Kame who just started changing his clothes while flinching in pain, his body is exhausted and hurt from forcing himself too much. He was heading to the door when suddenly, the door opened and Jin walked in. He hurried up wanting to flee the dressing room and avoid the other, but Jin stopped in front of him demanding for his attention.  

Jin: Kazu, I want to tell you something!

Kame: Not now!

Jin: But when? We need to talk about what happened!

Kame: *trying to put a straight face* move away!

Jin: I won’t! Kazu….what I did is be—

Kame: *yells* I don’t give a damn! Just move away from the door!

Jin: I’m sorry!

Kame: *clench his lips from frustration and try to calm his feelings* I don’t want to hear it!

Jin: I’m sorry!! *bows deeply*


Jin: *tears falling* I didn’t mean what I did, or maybe I did….it’s just I couldn’t control my—

Kame: SHUT UP!!! SHUT THE FUCK UP!! *pushes Jin away from the door*

Jin: *stumbles and falls on the floor, but stretch his hand to hold Kame’s legs so that he won’t leave* please hear me out Kazu, please!

Kame: *try to push Jin’s hands away* LET GO!!

Jin: I’M SORRY!!!

Kame: *stands on Jin’s hand* YOU THINK SORRY WILL SOLVE ANYTHING!!

Jin: *groans from the pain* KAZU!!!

Kame: *raise Jin’s head and start punching his face harshly* WHY DID YOU DO IT, HA?? WHY?? DID YOU ENJOY HUMILIATING ME?? YOU SICK BASTARD!!

Jin: I’M SORRY *kept repeating those two words while tears falling*

Kame: *threw Jin to the floor and started kicking him on the stomach* YOU THINK SORRY WILL TAKE BACK WHAT YOU DID?? YOU KILLED ME!!!  

T-TUN came running inside the dressing room after hearing the shouts and yells and were shocked to see Kame punching and kicking Jin badly.

Maru: *held Kame right hand* STOP IT KAME!!

Ueda: *held Kame left hand* what the hell got into you? Stop already! He’s bleeding!!

Kame ignored what they said and kept fighting them trying to continue beating Jin.



Koki: *held a badly bruised Jin and stepped back from Kame’s reach* we have a photo-hoot Kame, how the hell will he appear like this now???

Taguchi: *freaked out from seeing Kame’s expression and Jin’s state* I’ll bring some ice and band aid. We need to cool down those bruises!

Kame: *finally stopped struggling and saw how Jin’s state was*

Jin had couple of bruises on his face, next to his eyes, his lips and his chin. His lower lip is bleeding as well as his hand which Kame stepped on couple of minutes ago. The scene broke Kame’s heart. He felt pain overwhelm him especially seeing how broken Jin expression was. He couldn’t believe that he hurt the older boy like that, but even though he did, the pain inside of his heart is still there. It didn’t make him feel better, in a matter of fact, it made him feel worse than before. His eyes locked with Jin’s and he flinched storming out of the room leaving a devastated Jin behind.

Although the punches and kicks did hurt Jin, but it was nothing compared to the pain he felt inside of his heart. He knew he deserved more and seeing how everyone stood for him against his youngest member made him feel guiltier. What Kame said had hit him deeply too and he was totally right. He never got to tell the younger boy the reason. Is that why he’s so angry? But, he didn’t give him a chance!

Koki: You ok?

Jin: ………..

Taguchi: *came back* Here is the ice!

Maru: Jin *put a hand on his shoulder* are you ok?

Jin: *looked at Maru without saying anything*

Everyone knew that Jin was still under the shock. They couldn’t blame him since they never imagine a day will come when Kame will beat Jin like this with so much hatred and anger.

Ueda: *put ice on Jin’s face*

Jin: *hissed from pain*

Ueda: It’s better this way in order to prevent it from getting swollen.  

Koki: What happened Jin?

Jin: *looks down trying to hold back his tears*

Koki: Why did Kame act li—

Maru: Let it go Koki!

Koki: *exchanged couple of glances with Ueda and Maru and dropped the topic off*

Ueda: We need to hide those bruises by make up

Taguchi: Heavy make up

Jin: *tries to find his voice to talk* so-someone should go check on Kazu

Maru: *sighs* Are you for real?

Ueda: *chuckles* as expected from Akakame!

Koki: *smiles gently* I’ll go check on him!


After Jin return, April 2007


~ In the Club ~   

Pi: I’m glad you’re back bakanishi, so we can party like this again!

Jin: *smiles bitterly* yeah *drinks another shot*

Yuu: *comes to the bar* hey guys, aren’t you planning on coming to the dance floor! It’s HOT!!

Ryo: I’m definitely coming! C’mon Pi, Jin!

Jin: You guys go, I will join you later!  

Ryo: *sighs* what’s gotten into you bakanishi? You’re totally ruining my mood!

Yuu: Did LA change you that much Jin?

Jin: Sorry guys, I just don’t feel like partying right now!

Ryo: Pi?

Pi: I’ll bring him with me later! You head first!

Yuu: Cool! Let’s go Ryo!!

Jin: It’s ok Pi, you should go with them!

Pi: *eyeing Jin* you’re drinking too much, enough already!

Jin: Let me drink! At least, I can have that, right?

Pi: *sighs* It’s not like you got rejected Jin!

Jin: He doesn’t want anything to do with me Pi! 

Pi: Why is that Jin? You always change the subject whenever I ask you, but what happened between you two?

Jin: I—I…I….left to LA!  

Pi: Oh please, it was far before that Jin!

Jin: I-I’m scared!

Pi: From what?

Jin: Everything!

Pi: *smacks Jin’s head* don’t act like a total idiot! If you’re scared from rejection, then you need to pull your courage and confess!

Jin: How can I confess after what I did?

Pi: What did you do?

Jin: *sighs* I’m not in the mood to talk Pi!

Pi: *shakes his head* Why are you grieving if you didn’t even confess? I never saw you as a coward who can’t confess his own feelings.

Jin: You will be shocked from knowing who I really am Pi!

Pi: What do you mean Jin?

Jin: ………..

Pi: Jin?

Jin: Can you take me home Pi? I’m getting dizzy!

Pi: Alright!

Jin: *walks with Pi, but stops suddenly to rush over the side of the street and throws up*

Pi: Great Jin! Just great!


~ In Jin’s Apartment ~

Pi: Here! Let me help you Jin! *tries to take off Jin accessories including watch and bracelets*

Jin: *pulls away his hand* its fine! I can take it off myself!

Pi: Hey! I was just trying to help!

Jin: Don’t act like you’re my mother!

Pi: *sighs* don’t take out on me Jin! I’m not the one who is ignoring you!

Jin: Good night Pi!

Pi: Good night Jin! *leaves the apartment*



End of Chapter 15


So, one of the two shots I've been working out turned out to be more a multi-chapter. I'm still writing it and reached 12000 words so far. I'm still going to continue till I finally finish it. Once I do, I will post it!! ^___^
It will be something different than my usual writings I mean, I can't wait to know what you all will think of it.
So, Chapter 15 is here....You will get to know the whole truth in chapter 16, so it's finally here. Enjoy reading and comments are

imangelofmusicimangelofmusic on March 23rd, 2010 09:50 am (UTC)
yep. once again u surprised me -_- yay!!! i so love this. suffer suffer suffer! evil jin. ...
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 09:53 am (UTC)
Wow! You're fast!! Hehehehehe~~
*gives u a hug and cupcake for being FIRST*

I'm glad you love it!
Yes, it's a lot of suffering as always ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear! ^^
ClarieWinchesterakameangel on March 23rd, 2010 10:12 am (UTC)
Kazu punched and kicked jin .... ah.. I can't imagine.. kazu chan is really hurt ne. Baka Jin.
And I am also feeling bad for current jin's status. Thanks god that he has Pi beside him.
Luv <3 for taking care of jin.
Thanks for the update. Can't wait to read more *Huggies*
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 10:59 am (UTC)
Yes, Kazu is real hurt ne >.<
And Jin, he is feeling so bad
I love how supportive Pi is!
*hugs u back*
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie ^^
Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on March 23rd, 2010 10:16 am (UTC)
WHATTHE....... this jin.. kazu... noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

im hurt ;-;
you better update soon
im bored right now... i almost fall asleep AT SGOOL! loool
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 11:03 am (UTC)
I know >.<
You will get to know soon dear
Please don't be *hugs u*
I will try to update soon ne~~
Wow, falling asleep at school is something I missed doing, LOL!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie!
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アグスティンagustin1982 on March 23rd, 2010 10:23 am (UTC)
[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch15
No kazu, dont do that? Poor jin, poor kame! When they can to be happy, I want they happy and love each others again! Update soon, please~
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 11:04 am (UTC)
Re: [Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch15
I feel bad for both of them ne~~
I will try my best to update soon!
I hope they will be happy, even I don't know if that will happen or not!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
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Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 11:05 am (UTC)
Yaaay! Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear! ^__^
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Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 11:26 am (UTC)
No worries dear! I'm so glad you love this fic!!
Unfortunately, they keep hurting each other a lot! Hopefully, that will change although I'm not sure when though >.<
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs u back tightly*
I'll try to update soon ne~~
baby_papillonbaby_papillon on March 23rd, 2010 11:21 am (UTC)
Ohhh Poor Jin
Kazu please fogive Jin already >o
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 11:28 am (UTC)
Yeah, I feel sorry for things being wrong like this ne >.<
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear! ^^
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Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 02:22 pm (UTC)
Well, my new fic is also angst, so I hope you will enjoy it as well!
I'm so happy that you're into the story!
I will try to update soon ne~~
*gives u a choco* for finally moving from a silent reader, LOL!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
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starg8fan_liz: Jin Akanishistarg8fan_liz on March 23rd, 2010 11:58 am (UTC)
Can't wait for the next chap!!! Kazu beat him up? Wow!
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 02:22 pm (UTC)
Yes he did!
Wow indeed especially that Jin didn't defend himself ne~~
Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^
dontstopmoredontstopmore on March 23rd, 2010 12:36 pm (UTC)
aawwww sad update~~
everyone's hurt ~~~
waiting for the next chappie!
hope things start to look brighter >.<
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 02:23 pm (UTC)
Yes they are ne~~
Unfortunately, the next chapter will take us to the start of the whole problem, so it's in the past.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
ღ~♥ Yuki ♥~ღkame_kiyumi on March 23rd, 2010 12:57 pm (UTC)
hmmm I'm still feeling confused over what had happened though... so I'll just wait for the next chap then...
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 02:24 pm (UTC)
Yes, everything will become clear once you read the next chapter!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear! ^^
annabella1988annabella1988 on March 23rd, 2010 01:09 pm (UTC)
i love this one dear, poor jin, poor kazu *cries* why they have to be like this? T_T
but dear, i love this update, u did very well.. hope to see another chapter soon..
i cant wait for ur new fic? yay~gambate ne~
thanks for sharing this one dear~
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 02:28 pm (UTC)
Yaaay! I'm so happy you love it! *hugs u*
I will try my best to update soon ne~~

Yes, hopefully I will finish writing the new fic soon at least during the weekend. I still don't know though with my midterms >.<

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting Anna-chan!!
jennishijennishi on March 23rd, 2010 02:01 pm (UTC)
Poor Jin! But I can't really blame Kazu for doing it!
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 02:29 pm (UTC)
Yes, I can't blame him either!
The reason will be known in the next chapter ne~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
Belleakabelle on March 23rd, 2010 02:06 pm (UTC)
Jin: *tries to find his voice to talk* so-someone should go check on Kazu
Maru: *sighs* Are you for real?

This part really broke my heart. Even though Jin's hurt by Kazu he stills cares more about Kazu's feelings, so sweet ;A;
Thank you for the update :D
Garnetgarnet_light on March 23rd, 2010 02:30 pm (UTC)
Yes, Jin cares a lot about Kazu. After all, he loves him.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear! ^^
sekkiboosekkiboo on March 24th, 2010 01:22 am (UTC)
oh my kame-chan...
you really beat up jin, so much..
jin tsk what a lover. XD
you're still so much concern about kame, after that..
hope this problem will end soon. XDXD
I want akame sweet.. LoL !!
Garnetgarnet_light on March 24th, 2010 12:07 pm (UTC)
Yes he did ne and still Jin cares about him, LOL!
I hope so too!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ^^
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