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15 March 2010 @ 02:55 pm
[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch14  

Chapter 14


During the release of “Yorokobi no Uta”, June 2007


Ryo: *held Ueda’s wrist* Wait!

Ueda: *angry* what? You didn’t have enough of insulting me? Let go or I’ll punch you on the face!

Ryo: *stumbles with what he wants to say* I—I’m...sorry!

Ueda: *little bit surprised to hear apologizes coming from Ryo*Let stop this insulting war between us Ryo.

Ryo: Eh?

Ueda: I rather not talking to you at all instead of hearing you keep on insulting me.

Ryo: But I---you know….It’s not about……I’m always like that….you know…

Ueda: I don’t care! Why did you declare this insult war against me anyway? Do you have something against me?

Ryo: I-I “It’s your entire fault when I can’t help but feel different toward you! I keep noticing you and see you differently than everyone else”

Ueda: Well??

Ryo: It’s your fault! You’re the one who started it by being someone with multiple characters and faces.

Ueda: Is that it? It definitely doesn’t give you the right to insult me till now. I stopped faking faces long time ago, so why the hell are you still on my tail?

Ryo: *smirks* why? Did I hurt your feelings?

Ueda: *getting angrier* do you think this is funny? Do you think my feelings mean nothing? Just because I’m a guy, doesn’t mean I don’t get hurt!!

Ryo: “Shit! I said something wrong again” What do you want me to say then? I already apologized!

Ueda: You know what, forget it! What I want you to do is to stop talking to me from now one. That definitely would be better for the both of us!

Ryo: *shocked from the sudden harsh request* W-what?? Why?

Ueda: *in a mocking tone* Do you even have to ask?

Ryo: B-but I—

Ueda: I hope you will grow up someday Ryo! Well then, good bye! *shot the other a harsh glare and left the club*

Ryo: SHIT! *kicked a table next to him* FUCK!! That hurts!! “But not as much as my heart hurts! Why do I feel like I’ve been rejected when I didn’t even confess yet? I need a drink!!”

Ryo head over the bar and started drinking himself trying to think of a way to correct things between him and Ueda. On the mean time, Jin was completely drunk, but he was very hyper and dancing nonstop. Pi came to the club and saw how Jin was acting like a party freak while Ryo seems depressed. Pi head toward Ryo to scold him for not watching over Jin, but he knew that would happen anyway especially when Ueda was there. But, he didn’t see the latter man anyway, seems like Ryo blow it up again.

Pi: So, your tongue definitely worked its magic and that’s the reason I can’t spot Ueda anywhere.

Ryo: Shut up! Fuck him, why should I care anyway?!

Pi: Well, if that’s true then what the hell are you doing here looking all gloomy while trying to get drunk?

Ryo: *looks like a lost kid at Pi* He doesn’t want to talk to me anymore! *pouts*

Pi: *giggles* I’m surprised the decision came this late!

Ryo: Fuck you Pi!! *shoot death glares at his best friend*

Pi: Well, you’re the fucked up one Ryo if you keep drinking! Why the hell did you invite Jin to clubbing for?

Ryo: Why would anyone invite someone to the club? To party of course!

Pi: Well, I’m not seeing you partying and you actually left him alone partying like a maniac!

Ryo: *laughs* you know! You’re starting to get on my nerve with being over protective! If you’re into Jin just go and tell him! I don’t see anyone stopping you!

Pi: HUH? What the hell are you talking about?

Ryo: You’re not in the position to lecture me! Do you even see yourself? You’ve been acting like this since the time Jin came back. You watch him all the time, annoy the hell out of him with rules and simply act like a caring wife!

Pi: *shocked* I’m just worried over him or don’t you know that he’s been the recent topic for all the gossips. He’s hurt and I need to be there to support him. That’s what friends for?

Ryo: Friends? It definitely seems like something else to me *gulps the last drops of his beer and asks for another one*

Pi: Hey! Just because you’ve been turned down by your lover, doesn’t mean you’re allowed to take it out on those who surround you!

Ryo: *spills his drink* WHAT?? What lover?? And who is turned down bakaPi??

Pi: You are and you’re mourning about it!

Ryo: Shut up! Why would I care about a freak like him anyway?? He’s good for nothing and doesn’t even deserve my insults!

Pi: *sighs* you’re pathetic Ryo! If you kept thinking in that way, you will lose your chance!

 Ryo: *gasps* you mean it’s too late? I can’t fix this??

Pi: *pats on Ryo’s shoulder* you can still fix it, but you need to move fast! But please, do something about your insulting mouth! You might truly lose him if you kept being like this!

Ryo: *sighs* I think I’m getting drunk Pi!

Pi: *chuckles* Hold on, I will get Jin and we will leave!


Jin: Piiiiiiii~~ Come, let’s party!

Pi: I swear I’m going to punch you once we get to your apartment!

Jin: Awwwww~~ you’re no fun!

Pi: Come, we’re leaving!

Jin: But I don’t want to leave!! *pouts like a small kid*

Pi: We’re definitely leaving Jin! Let’s hope you won’t be in tomorrow’s news!

Jin: I don’t care anymore!! Let them say whatever they want! I don’t have anyone who cares about it anyway!!

Pi: Just because a certain someone don’t care doesn’t mean you don’t have other people who don’t care as well!

Jin: I don’t care!! I want him to care!!

Pi: Jin, seriously we need to leave! You don’t want to be scolded by Johnny-san, do you?

Jin: Fuck him! It’s his entire fault that old fat man!! I hate him! *stumbles, but stands on his feet again with Pi’s help*

Pi: Don’t take it out on him! You should be thankful for him! C’mon, stop sulking and let’s leave!


~ In Jin’s apartment ~

Jin: *looking for something in his jacket*here it is!

Pi: Who are you calling?

Jin: *already dialed the number* Kazu!

Pi: *shocked* WHAT? Give it to me!

Jin: *turns away from Pi* No! I want to talk to him!

Pi: Jin! It’s not like he’s going to answer you! Don’t embarrass yourself and give me the phone!

Jin: *the phone was picked up* Kazu!!

Kame: *in a sleepy tone still didn’t register the voice* who is this?

Jin: It’s me Jin! *Kame is wide awake now after hearing the name* Kazu, listen to—*Kame ended the call* Hello? Hello?? Kazu??

Pi: *sighs* its 3 am Jin!! He’s sleeping!

Jin: *tears started falling* he ended the call!!

Pi: He needs time Jin! Things can’t be fixed like this! Just give him some time!

Jin: But if I did, then nothing will ever change! I don’t want his cold shoulder anymore Pi! *sobs*

 Pi: Shhhhhhhh *pats Jin’s back* it’s ok! Things will be better soon. I know it will, just be patient!

Jin: I miss him!!

Pi: I know you do!

Jin: Will he ever forgive me Pi? Tell me the truth!

Pi: *putting a smile on his face* he will Jin. Someday, he will! “Sorry Jin, but I’m not even sure if that day will ever come.”


~ In Kame’s apartment~

Kame: *pressed the end call while holding his hand over his heart trying to calm his heart beats * why is he calling me? *looks at the time to see its 3:12 am and hides under his bed sheets trying to breath normally*

 “Why won’t you leave me alone Jin! How the hell will I be able to go to sleep now after hearing your voice? Shit! Why do I still get affected by him?!”


End of Chapter 14


Sorry for updating this late, but my headaches been so bad lately. I hope you will enjoy this chapter and I promise you a soon update probably later or tomorrow for Kame Goes Wild ^___^
Comments are always

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Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on March 15th, 2010 11:18 am (UTC)
am i first?!

if i do then i will say

awww kazu why did u ignore jin's call 8pouts*

and ryoo u did it. again. this time realli bad. =/
*runs to tat-chan* dont be mad.. im sure that idiot ryo would say sorry again XD
Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on March 15th, 2010 11:18 am (UTC)
and GET WELL SOON!! <3
(no subject) - garnet_light on March 15th, 2010 11:29 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - ueda_fangirl on March 15th, 2010 05:10 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - garnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:22 pm (UTC) (Expand)
annabella1988: akameannabella1988 on March 15th, 2010 11:54 am (UTC)
awwww~u update sweetie~ hehe..
uh no.. why ryo? of coz tatchan hurt.. T_T
hope they both will be okay...
kazuuu~~ why? poor jin...
i love it dear~

more? hehe
will be waiting
Garnetgarnet_light on March 15th, 2010 12:21 pm (UTC)
Yes I finally did ^^
Ryo hurt Tat-chan again >.<
I hope so too
I feel sorry for Jin too, but for Kazu as well
I'm so happy that you loved it!! *hugs*
Sure, soon there will be more ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie~~

baybeshynebaybeshyne on March 15th, 2010 12:05 pm (UTC)
awww poor jin..he is self destructing!!
everyone is miserable!! please bring them some happiness soon!!
pi...what a good friend always looking out for them when his life is suffering....and kame and jin....need to talk it out...they are miserable without each other anyways.
thanks for sharing...cant wait for next update!
Garnetgarnet_light on March 15th, 2010 12:23 pm (UTC)
Yes he is ne~~
I feel sorry for him too >.<
I hope everyone will find happiness soon too ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
I will update soon ne~~

Ruth: kame-chanblaztdard on March 15th, 2010 01:13 pm (UTC)
Poor Jin... Will Kame ever forgive him? >,<

And Ryo... I wish him a good luck, he seems to need one just like Jin...
Lol~ Jin and Ryo... somehow the problem kind of the same...
the person whom they love doesn't want to talk to them anymore. XD

Thanks for sharing~
Garnetgarnet_light on March 15th, 2010 01:46 pm (UTC)
I hope he will ne ~~
Yes they have the same problem, but for different reasons I guess!
Let's hope things will be better! ^^

thanks a lot for reading and commenting!! *hugs*
dontstopmoredontstopmore on March 15th, 2010 01:18 pm (UTC)
i totally understand how it is to let someone you loved alot affect you even after time has passed!
poor kame <3

get well soon!
Garnetgarnet_light on March 15th, 2010 01:48 pm (UTC)
Yeah, it shows how much Kame loves Jin ne~~
He is still affected by him even after all that time!
Thanks a lot!

Thank you for reading and commenting! *hugs tight*
dorayaki_chandorayaki_chan on March 15th, 2010 01:53 pm (UTC)
Ha ha ha it's hard not to laugh at ryo's bakaness so much for his poison tongue it'seems so out of our hand sometimes when we want to make to fix something so bad, but in the end things just get even worse :( it's like we can't do anything right.it's so hard to make make peace with our self, to let things go just for a while,if it's meant to be for you,things will fall in to right place :) and you just make me head over heels for pi all over again gyaaaaaa . (^o^)b
Garnetgarnet_light on March 15th, 2010 02:07 pm (UTC)
Ahhh, you totally get it dear!! ^^
Sometimes we keep doing bad things instead of correcting things without noticing thinking that we are actually doing the better thing.

Pi is a great friend and this is what I always believed!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie~~
sekkiboosekkiboo on March 15th, 2010 02:58 pm (UTC)
thanks for the update :DD

aww~ jin let time pass by first, I hope kazu will forgive him soon.. mou~..
kazu please talk to jin, even just a minute. Onegai!!
nah~. that idiot ryo-chan keeps on insulting uepi. XDXD
war love~. Lol!! ryo you're not late, things will get better *i hope so*

bwhahah =]
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 12:58 pm (UTC)
Yeah, Jin should let Kazu be alone for a while ne~~
Ryo is just an idiot ne~~
He keeps saying the wrongs things to Tat-chan!
I hope none of them is late ne~~

thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear! *hugs*
(no subject) - sekkiboo on March 17th, 2010 11:31 am (UTC) (Expand)
AkaNisHi_beTtybettynishi on March 15th, 2010 02:59 pm (UTC)
update!! yayy!!
waiting for next chappie with more akame~
i hope kazu will forgive jin soon....
*poor jin*
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 12:59 pm (UTC)
Yes, there will be more akame in next chapter!
and the update will be soon too ^^
I hope so too ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ^^
ღ~♥ Yuki ♥~ღkame_kiyumi on March 15th, 2010 02:59 pm (UTC)
eck.. i wan more akame~ hahaha....
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:01 pm (UTC)
There will be more akame in the next chapters, so don't worry ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading sweetie ^^
ClarieWinchesterakameangel on March 15th, 2010 04:18 pm (UTC)
Wah!!!!!!!!!!! still bad :( ... Hope things will be better soon. Pi is really caring ne. I will be dying to have that kind of friend. Thanks for this Chappy. Chu~~~
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:02 pm (UTC)
Yes it is ne >.<
I hope so too
I love how caring Pi is, he is a true friend ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear! *hugs*
starg8fan_liz: Jin Akanishistarg8fan_liz on March 15th, 2010 05:07 pm (UTC)
yay for update!!! XD poor ryo lol can't say the right thing ever XD
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:03 pm (UTC)
That's Ryo ne~~
He never says something right! LOL!
Thanks a lot for reading dear ^_^
Belleakabelle on March 15th, 2010 08:34 pm (UTC)
I have fallen behind with all of your fics but I promise that I'll catch up in some time T^T
Thank you for the update and hope that your headache will get better :)
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:04 pm (UTC)
No worries dear ^__^
Thank you for your wishes and can't wait to read your comments after your read the updates ne~~
akameluv012 on March 15th, 2010 09:02 pm (UTC)
hope akame back together soon...love the fic...thank you for update
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:05 pm (UTC)
I hope so too >.<
I'm happy that you love it!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*
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Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:09 pm (UTC)
Yes and I can't say the next one will be any better ne~~
After all, this fic is filled with angst X_X
Well, I'm currently working on a one-shot with a drunk Jin, so I hope you will enjoy it *winks*

I hope there will be a way to fix things ne~~
Thanks a lot! I will do my best to take care of myself! Hehehehehe~~
*hugs u back*
I just felt extra charged from those akame kisses, Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie!! Chuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~
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(no subject) - garnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:50 pm (UTC) (Expand)
lost_sky6lost_sky6 on March 16th, 2010 03:08 am (UTC)
Drunken Jin is cool XDDD but poor him >.< I hope Kame will be able to listen to Jin someday!

Loved the update ^__^
Can't wait for more~!
Garnetgarnet_light on March 16th, 2010 01:11 pm (UTC)
Well, there will be a drunken Jin one-shot coming soon!! *winks*
I hope so too ^__^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! *hugs*