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27 December 2009 @ 07:43 pm
[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch4  
Title: The Wrong Move
: Akame (main), TomaPi, Ryoda
: R
Romance, Angst, Smut.
 When Jin thought that he can finally put the past behind him, it came back hunting him. Will it stop hunting him one day?
I don't own any characters from Johnny;s Entertainment, but I wish I own Kame.

Chapter 4


During Cartoon KAT-TUN II You Tour, 2007


~ Backstage – Dressing room~

Kame was alone in the dressing room preparing for the concert later today, but Ueda noticed how little distracted he was which something Kame never shows to anyone.

Ueda: “Something must have happened, but knowing Kame he probably won’t tell me anything and will just shrug it off *Kame dropped his foundation box and cursed* but he really seems off, so not like him. Maybe I should ask? What will I lose anyway? ”.

Ueda: K-Ka—

Koki: YOO!!

Ueda was interrupted by the sudden appearance of Koki, followed by Maru too who greeted them with the same energy Koki did. Ueda’s attention went back to Kame again; Kame replied back faintly, he was just too obvious, what could be that big that it affected Kame that much? Even Taguchi who is playing with his PSP started to be concerned about Kame’s mood. Koki noticed immediately and after trading some glances with the other members, he couldn’t stop himself anymore.

Kame started painting his nails with black, but failed miserably. He kept spacing out not noticing the mess he made each time he starts with a nail. So, he started using a remover to undo everything he did couple of minutes ago and redo it again.

Koki: Kame-chan~~

Kame: Hmmmmm? *started to paint his nails again*

Koki: How about I do it for you?

Kame: It’s fine

Koki: I insist, let me do it! I like painting nails!! *trying to sound like a happy kid*

Kame: *sighs* Fine

Koki started painting Kame’s nails when he noticed that the latter has spaced out again while seeing his hands movement.

Koki: Something happened?

Kame: Hmmm?

Koki: Did something happen?

Kame: Not really

Koki: Then?

Kame: It’s probably the lack of sleep, don’t worry *fakes a smile*

Koki: I see

Koki knew that Kame didn’t want to talk. It might seem to people that Kame is very talkative and all, but in real life, he isn’t, not about his feelings or personal problems. Everyone in KAT-TUN knew that Kame was discussing his problems with one person only and that person was Jin. They don’t want to remember how hellish it was for them after Jin went away. Kame’s character has changed badly. Not that it became bad, but it didn’t become good either. It’s somehow wasn’t the Kame they used to know, that childish Kame who was so adorable, cute and sweet. He became the reliable type, it’s like he grew 10 years more in just a short period, but they blame it on the work. KAT-TUN was relying on Kame too much and Kame had to work 10 times more than before. They hope that once Jin will come back, Kame burden will no longer exists and he can go back to be the old Kame.

*knocks* *knocks*

Manager: Excuse me

KT-TUN got surprised for the appearance of their manager. Something looked wrong and everyone paid attention to him waiting for him to start talking.

Manager: I have good news

KT-TUN sighed in relief.

Kame: What is it? *little excited*

T-TUN was glad to see that the manager has already changed their younger band mate foul mood and they felt the excitement running through their veins too.

Maru: Yes, tell us please!

Manager: It seems that Akanishi is returning back to Japan this week!


Koki felt like something is vibrating which he thought might be his body because of his shocked and excited state, but when he laid his eyes on Kame, something was off; Kame was trembling in shock and silence.  “Maybe he’s just shocked? After all, he was the one who was affected greatly by Jin’s disappearance. Maybe he’s still mad at him for leaving and didn’t forgive him yet”

Ueda: It was about time! *rolling his eyes*

Taguchi: That’s good to know

Maru: And? What will happen now?

 Manager: *noticed Kame’s silence, but shrugged it off* Well, you have to resume your concerts. All the songs in the album which Akanishi didn’t participate in will not include him except in dancing. So, I hope you can lend him a hand with the dancing. Once he comes, there will be a conference of his comeback, but when that is finished, you all including Akanishi need to train with you six  being together and change the settings of the songs and etc.

Taguchi: When is he coming back exactly?

Manager: I wasn’t informed the exact date, but all I know is that he will be coming during this week.

Koki: What about today’s concert?

Manager: It will resume as the usual, nothing will change. Not until Akanishi comes and joins you in your tour.

Maru: Alright!

Manager: I’ll have my leave now. Good luck today!

Maru/Koki: Thank you!

 Ueda: I can’t believe that he decided to come back now! Talk about the bad timing!!

Koki: I’m not sure whether I’m happy or sad, but it’s still good news.

Taguchi: Yes, it is~~ I wonder how Jin is doing?

Maru: Yeah!! Hope he learned English well!

Taguchi: Oh, Kame, aren’t you glad?

Kame:  Not really! Excuse me *hurries in leaving the room*

Ueda: *smacks Taguchi’s head* Are you an idiot??

Taguchi: What the hell did you do that for?

Ueda: What kind of question is that “aren’t you glad?”?

Taguchi: It just because he didn’t say anything, I wanted to know what he thinks.

Ueda: Good, you succeeded, happy now?? *leaves the room following Kame*

Taguchi: *looks at Koki and Maru* what did I do?

Both Koki and Maru started shaking their head for Taguchi’s clueless nature. The guy was hopeless.




During 1 Pound no Fukuin, 2008


*door bell*

Kame: Coming!

When Kame opens the door, he dies in his track. He looks at Jin in shock, eyes widen and freeze in his spot, not moving or saying anything. Jin freaked out from his reaction not knowing what to say. He just kept silent looking at him as the latter looked at him too. When Kame’s mind could process again, he tried to close the door, but Jin used his foot to stop him.

Jin: I want to talk with you

Kame: I don’t!! Get your foot away or I’ll just break it for you.

Jin: Then do it! I wouldn’t mind if it’s you. Break anything you want in me if that’s going to make you feel better!

Kame: Nothing is going to make me feel better you jerk! What parts of “I don’t want to see you ever again” don’t you get??

Jin: Kazu!!

Kame: Shut up!! Just go, go back to your home or to LA or hell!! I don’t care wherever it is, just leave me alone!!

Jin pushed Kame away from the door and got inside. He closed the door behind him while Kame stared at him with shock and fear.

Kame: LEAVE!!

Jin: I won’t! Not until you hear me!!

Kame: I don’t want to hear anything you got me; I’m over all that shit!!

Jin: Kazu *grabs his wrist*


Jin: I’m sorry Kazu, I’m sorry


Jin: But I can’t Kazu….I can’t leave you….

Kame: Please leave Jin….*drops down on his knees* please leave. “I can’t face you yet….I can’t!! I’m not ready”

Jin: *hugs Kame* I don’t want to….I can’t even if I want to….I’m  so sorry for leaving you Kazu, I’m sorry for everything.

Kame: *tears start falling* I hate you *hits Jin’s back with his hands* I hate you so much!!

Jin: I know *his tears start to fall as well and caress his back with soft pat of his hand* I know


End of Chapter 4

I know everyone is waiting for Kame Goes Wild update, but I'm currently in a blank mode. I already finished this chapter from a while, but I had personal problems and family issues and couldn't check on it earlier. Anyway, I hope things will be better so that I will have motivation to update the other fic. Hope you will enjoy this. I know it might be very confusing now since I'm jumping around from time to time, but you will get the big picture soon. I promise.
Don't forget that comments are always
diisa_pinky: akame-03diisa_pinky on December 27th, 2009 04:17 pm (UTC)
0.0 now jin's back~~~
what will happen in the next chappie??? i want to know! >_<
thanks for sharing and updating :D
waiting for more ;)
Garnetgarnet_light on December 27th, 2009 06:58 pm (UTC)
Yeah he is~~
I will update soon dear, don't worry~~
Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^
imangelofmusicimangelofmusic on December 27th, 2009 05:08 pm (UTC)
me likey likey!
Garnetgarnet_light on December 27th, 2009 07:00 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!
thanks a lot for reading dear!!
norbbiz: kkazuyanorbbiz on December 27th, 2009 05:50 pm (UTC)
;_____; this is so sad and messy!
i wonder what happens next.
nice writing the story is interesting.
thanks for sharing it :)
Garnetgarnet_light on December 27th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC)
Yes it is
You will know soon sweetie
Thanks, I'm glad you think it is ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting :D
Puriiii~ueda_fangirl on December 27th, 2009 06:59 pm (UTC)
oh man! i was hoping u would update kame goes wild =[

ooh well.. this chapter would do i guess =P


i wonna cry right now ;-;
u stupid jin *cries*
actualli kame should have kicked him instead of this crying loool
Garnetgarnet_light on December 27th, 2009 09:25 pm (UTC)
I will update it now sweetie ^^
I was very motivated and in Akame mode, hehehe

He is, isn't he? *hugs u and pats ur back to stop crying*
LOL!! He should have ne~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie *chuuuuuuuuuuuuuu*
(no subject) - ueda_fangirl on December 27th, 2009 10:59 pm (UTC) (Expand)
annabella1988annabella1988 on December 27th, 2009 07:55 pm (UTC)
sweetie~ u update!
gives u cupcake*

awww~Kame, why he mad at Jin? what actually happen to them?
but this is a good chapter dear,
gambate to update next chappie ne, me will be waiting

awww~ i dont know what your personal problem is but i wish your problem will be solve soon. *pray for u*

and and, me want kame goes wild too *pout*
hehe...its okay dear, take ur time ne

btw, thanks for ur update, i enjoyed it very much

Garnetgarnet_light on December 27th, 2009 10:04 pm (UTC)
*eats the cupcake*
Thank you ~~

You will know soon in the coming chapters dear. Don't worry, I will update this fic regularly from now on. I already finished the next 2 chapters.

Thanks a lot for your good wishes sweetie~~
Yes, I hope they will be solved soon as well *hugs*

Well, I already updated it!!
I felt motivated and decided to write quickly or else, I might not write it again.

I'm glad you did~~
Thanks a lot for always reading and commenting on my fic sweetie~~

mizz_miyukimizz_miyuki on December 27th, 2009 09:37 pm (UTC)
ooooooo good story update soon i wanna know wat happens badly! >.< lol

<3 kame <3
Garnetgarnet_light on December 27th, 2009 10:07 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you found it good ^^
I will update soon, don't worry ~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!!
Anaaninhacmpereira on December 27th, 2009 09:59 pm (UTC)
I'm still confused and this is still interesting! LOL

I'm really curious. Every chapter I read, I'm more and more curious. At least I know that Jin is really sorry.

I hope your personal problems will be resolved soon. ^^

I'll be waiting for your next update!
Garnetgarnet_light on December 27th, 2009 10:14 pm (UTC)
I bet it's very confusing, but it's getting better than before ne~~

Yeah, Jin is very sorry and that shows a lot in his actions.

Thanks, I hope they will soon! *hugs*

I will update this fic probably by Tuesday, so you won't wait for a long time ne~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie!!

ClarieWinchesterakameangel on December 28th, 2009 02:19 am (UTC)
Still messy but getting more and more interesting. Looking forward to your next next chapters..Gambate!!!
Garnetgarnet_light on December 28th, 2009 08:39 am (UTC)
Yes it is, but I'm glad you found it interesting~~

Thanks a lot, I will try my best!!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
mae0513mae0513 on December 28th, 2009 05:26 am (UTC)
poor kame-chan~~
cant wait what will happen next
plz update soon~~~
Garnetgarnet_light on December 28th, 2009 08:43 am (UTC)
Yeah, he is
I will update soon ^^
Thanks for reading and commenting!
dorayaki_chandorayaki_chan on December 28th, 2009 05:27 am (UTC)
Garnetgarnet_light on December 28th, 2009 08:44 am (UTC)
I'm happy you loved it!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
mayuu: jin and the eggplant~!! ^^yuyako16 on December 28th, 2009 06:01 am (UTC)
aw this made me tear up~ and listening to Precious One didn't help one bit
i wonder how things will go now~ i really hope they fix things soon. i don't like seeing or more like reading about them when they're apart~ too much angst ToT

and i can't wait to read more of Kame goes Wild. lol i'm still at chapter 10 since i just started reading it now, so i'm off to read more of that. hihi ^^
Garnetgarnet_light on December 28th, 2009 08:47 am (UTC)
Sorry for making you cry dear >.<
Yes, I dislike that too, but it seems I do it a lot *smacks my head*

Yaaay! Thanks for reading it and continuing to do so, I hope you liked it!!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
*hugs tight*
jennishijennishi on December 28th, 2009 02:19 pm (UTC)
Garnetgarnet_light on December 29th, 2009 10:41 pm (UTC)
I hope that will change soon although some of the coming chapters are probably more sad.

Thanks a lot for reading dear!
ayakanishiayakanishi on December 29th, 2009 01:27 am (UTC)
*eats pizza first*

back! man i\m full, LOLS!
anyways. back to the fic...
gawd, kame you're such a stubborn kid!
just forgive him will you!?

(look who's talking, hahaha!the do-no-want-to-talk-about-jin girl, hahaha!!!)

anyways, love the update dear...:D
Garnetgarnet_light on December 29th, 2009 10:44 pm (UTC)
Yes he is ne~
But, who knows what will happen!

I'm glad you loved it!
Thanks for reading and commenting dear! *hugs*
Belleakabelle on December 29th, 2009 07:23 pm (UTC)
This story is so exiting and the end really makes me want to read more ^^
And you have updated Kame Goes Wild now, nothing beats a evening full of Akame fics ^___^
Thank you :D
Garnetgarnet_light on December 29th, 2009 10:57 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you think so ^^
Anything for Akame ne~~

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie! *hugs*
Mystical_Powers: KameXmasmystical_powers on December 29th, 2009 07:52 pm (UTC)
Awww poor Kame =[ mou *hugs*
I hope more will come soon =D
I quite like this flashback jumping ^_^
Garnetgarnet_light on December 29th, 2009 10:59 pm (UTC)
Yes, I feel bad for him ne~~
I'm updating the next chapter now ^^
I'm glad you do, I thought of trying to write a fic using this concept ne~~

Thanks for reading and commenting!